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Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


I imagined when it was time
for our good-bye                                                  I pause.
there would be                                                    You pause.
a Moment.                                                            
                                                                        A long look,
                                                                        a light, lingering kiss.
                 
                                                                       Somewhere in the background
When it happened, though,                                   Andrea Bocelli, in person,
you had to dash for a cab blaring                           is singing-- "Con Te Partiro".
a Geico commercial.
©2007-2008 ~Misplaced-Karma
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The style's a bit different since I picked back up, I notice.

What you you think?

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~Treble-Spaz:iconTreble-Spaz: Dec 20, 2007, 8:16:33 AM
I like the style--interesting use of the Spanish Song since you are so French based?
=levdir:iconlevdir: Dec 20, 2007, 10:41:17 AM
I dig this. It's amusing and bitter and morose.

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Unless the sun inside you is burning your gut, don't do it.
~Bestial-Shenanigans:iconBestial-Shenanigans: Dec 20, 2007, 10:28:31 PM
I like it also... special meaning to me given that I don't recognize these names. More echoes of a world I'm trying to ignore.

I guess I recognize "Geico" but what does that have to do with a taxi cab?
~LipWriting:iconLipWriting: Dec 21, 2007, 12:07:24 PM
Oooh...I like it. Different is good.

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"If you can't laugh at yourself, life's gonna seem a whole lot longer than you like. " - Garden State
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roses are red
violets are blue
Some poems rhyme
this one doesn't?
~Misplaced-Karma:iconMisplaced-Karma: Dec 21, 2007, 1:32:06 PM
it's a gorgeous song.

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Escape Cold Herons, Jak.
~Misplaced-Karma:iconMisplaced-Karma: Dec 21, 2007, 1:32:48 PM
thanks.

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Escape Cold Herons, Jak.
~Misplaced-Karma:iconMisplaced-Karma: Dec 21, 2007, 1:33:03 PM
they play them on the radio.

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Escape Cold Herons, Jak.
~Misplaced-Karma:iconMisplaced-Karma: Dec 21, 2007, 1:33:43 PM
I think Dan is a pretty cool guy. eh digs poems and doesn't afraid of anything.

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Escape Cold Herons, Jak.
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